momfreeek's game Reviews on Newgrounds

[Wonderland]

wow

I've never seen anything like it. I'm in awe. And where did you get that music? I played it three times so I could listen to more of that music.

[File Catcher]

some gameplay going

Considering the subject, its actually quite fun. Obviously the first place for improvement is this subject. Putting files in a folder doesn't really stir the imagination.

So you used military rankings, cause you were in the army. Whats it got to do with the game? Find a subject and stick with it. Who wants to be a Captain of putting files into folders? Not me.

So find some inspiration, put your drawing gloves on, and make it cool. I also want big flashy numbers and sound effects when I get lots of points.

RLS0812 responds:

thanks for input, I am not that good yet, but i am allways open to ideas.